My father like eat KFC
He is in there learning ABC
He says the food is so nice
But the drink had much ice
Brain freeze he had, so he couldn’t see
Limerick Brain freeze
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That is a very wack poem, but I do like rhyming in the poem. I there is an image but a cannot see it, nor can I open the image.
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I really like this poem I hope you continue to write more blogs in the future. I noticed that your father really likes KFC what is your favorite fast food restaurant?
Noe
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Do you like KFC and do you know the ABCs?
Jerry,
Nice poem! It is very unique and creative. Was there something specific that inspired you to write this poem? What’s your favorite type of poem? If you want to, you can check out my blog here: http://ashtonl2019.edublogs.org/
Keep writing,
Ashton
Dear Jerry,
This poem really opened up my eyes. It would be pretty cool if we could learn the ABC’s in KFC. This idea would benefit the masses. I hope your father is okay after that blinding brain freeze.
-Your Friend Francis
http://francil2019.edublogs.org/
I’m sure he’ll be fine if he slows down with the cold stuff 😉 We may have stumbled onto a gold mine idea with learning and fried chicken, haha
Hi Jerry!
I love your poem! So many people disregard poetry these days, especially about everyday topics. I hope your father was okay; usually, brain freezes don’t blind people. Also, you have become something of a magical phenomenon at my school. Everyone in my class waits on the edge of their seats to read your posts. If you want to check out my blog, here is the link: http://matthewm12019.edublogs.org/
Have a nice day!
Matthew
P.S. I read your poem about the lady with the big hat, and I really enjoyed it.
Thanks, Matthew. I’m sorry your school is so boring you’re waiting for our posts, haha. Just kidding. I’m glad you like them.
Well, your poem certainly inspired a lot of fun comments! I like limericks a lot because of the humor, and I found the brain freeze idea very funny. I hope you’ll be posting more of your wonderful writing throughout the challenge.
~Miss Blessing
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Vermont, USA